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The writer's dilemma

You might as well know it, if you don’t already: there’s tension between the writer’s need to connect with his or her fans – through, say, oh, I don’t know, blogs? – and the writer’s need to make money.

You can clearly see which end of the dilemma I’ve been coming out on lately.

The problem is, [...]

Hating on (fictional) travelogues

Why I hate travelogues in fiction

Read it aloud!

I’ve started to read my writing aloud as I rewrite it. It’s one of those things I don’t know why I’ve not been doing all along. Both perceptive audience members at my readings and the amazing Critical Mass writers group advised me to try it. It helps.

As I think I’ve mentioned (although I can’t find [...]

Learning not to get it right the first time

As I’ve said before, my biggest barrier to achieving my dream – which is to write as many of the stories inside me as vividly and well as I can before I die, and entertain and delight you and the world – is the compulsion to get it right the first time.

No doubt for some [...]

A passing observation on rewriting

The farther I get along in a draft of the book, I see, the smoother it all becomes. Fewer false starts, smoother flow, even fewer typos.

At first when I’m writing a tale, I’m hunting: for voice, theme, character, even the real story. No matter how firmly I feel I have it in my mind, I [...]

Using pre-written scenes

One of the key writing skills I’ve learned in the last year or so is how to incorporate scenes I’ve already written as I write.

Yes, I’ve been a professional writer, almost exclusively full-time, for thirty-five years now. And I’m still learning important new skills. I have not served my craft well all the time, nor [...]

Detoxifying writing

When I draw the sting from the act of writing, I’ll liberate myself to truly advance my craft, and write both the quality and quantity I should.

Last night I couldn’t sleep. Couldn’t get comfortable. Mind freewheeled. Finally I bagged it and got up.

But despite my mind’s overactivity I felt too mentally unfocused to write. So [...]

A step back isn't bad...

…When it’s followed by two steps forward. Or even a single step forward. Maybe. In the short run.

Staying even’s better than losing ground.

As you can probably tell, I haven’t been nearly as productive of late as I want to be.

There’s even a blog post hanging fire that I began last week, and even told [...]

Literary criticism

I’m reading James Rollins’ Black Order, and it’s been a bit of a trial. I have to say it’s sloppily written, showing distinct signs of being a first draft that was sent in unread. And the author goes into greater detail on weapons than he has the actual knowledge to, and you know that tweaks [...]

Bracketing shots

Yesterday was Critical Mass day. I love writers group. I always learn a bunch.

After a post-session dinner at a nice Thai restaurant downtown I’d not been to before we got to discussing Classics Illustrated Comics.  Turned out a lot of us grew up on them. Small surprise, I suspect. Turned out we also largely shared [...]